I like the idea, but rather than just a madman in Victorian England, you could add a Sherlock Holmes type character. Maybe a monstrous musclebound form for Cailean would be cool, caused by a temporary serum. Finally I suggest a wealthy girl who likes Cailean despite the burn scars (they meet due to Doctor Waller's connections). All the same, this is simply a suggestion, and I slightly doubt you will use any of this. *shrugs and walks away*
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I like the idea, but rather than just a madman in Victorian England, you could add a Sherlock Holmes type character. Maybe a monstrous musclebound form for Cailean would be cool, caused by a temporary serum. Finally I suggest a wealthy girl who likes Cailean despite the burn scars (they meet due to Doctor Waller's connections). All the same, this is simply a suggestion, and I slightly doubt you will use any of this. *shrugs and walks away*